Friday Five Minute Writing Prompt - But


Battling to my

Utmost BUT

Totally losing


Bravely standing, BUT

Upside down.

Task for another day.


Broken 

Unopened

Terrified


Bravely Battling. Broken, BUT

Unbowed.

Tamed, I am not.


Comments

  1. I love that last stanza's sentiment of being broken but not defeated. Thanks for sharing with the FMF community! (Your neighbor at #11 this week.)

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  2. May God undergird you! ❤️ G

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  3. Some folks want to call me brave,
    and it's tempting to accept the label,
    but that would make me willing slave
    to the plot of this fell fable,
    'cause cancer is what cancer does,
    fatigue, despair, and blinding pain.
    I am not what I once was,
    but terrified, I yet remain
    to face this long and endless night,
    to face the work that comes with dawn.
    It is more ordeal than fight,
    but life still somehow must go on,
    and I must pull from deep inside
    what I have left of manly pride.

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    1. Andrew, I love how you really own what you read and then share it back to us. I read your comments elsewhere and they always enhance the source. Best wishes to you.

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  4. Great acronyms for BUT!! Hang in there, you will keep moving forward as you listen to Him. Kath, your FMF neighbour at #12 this week.

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  5. oh, I liked this. Nicely done. Poignant. FMF16

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