Friday Five Minute Writing Prompt - Second

 


Second place

Split second

Second to none

Just a second

Change is that fast


Not quite the best

Life here and then gone

First place, not second

waiting but it's always

more than a second


And then never forget the second great commandment  - 

Love thy neighbor as thyself |

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  1. Wow! That was short and to the point. I am your neighbour on FMF

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    1. Hi. Is this Carol. I left a comment on your Esther post but I don't see it.

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  2. oh, I liked this! :) nicely put together. FMF15

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  3. Loving neighbour as oneself
    cam be quite hard to do,
    putting back upon the shelf
    the stuff he put me through,
    like music played too loud at night
    and parking on my lawn,
    then giving my poor dogs a fright
    with a mailbox cherry bomb.
    But then one day he got his mail,
    and opened a letter,
    turned white and then let out a wail,
    and suddenly I knew him better,
    for someone he had loved had died,
    and I held him as he cried.

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    1. And there you are. Love your neighbor. I'm glad you were there for him.

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